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git clone https://repo.autonoma.ca/repo/delibero.git
Organized sections from feedback. Expanded sections with more details.
| Author | Dave Jarvis <email> |
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| Date | 2014-09-15 01:10:34 GMT-0700 |
| Commit | 9eaf34d5884e2c92e8a25eb6921e719cf3179736 |
| Parent | 725e773 |
xml/tex/ch-introduction.tex
| \startsection[title={\WPintro{}}] | ||
| - \italic{\WPname{}} is a technical solution for anonymous collaboration | ||
| - on \WPproposals{} to reach a consensus. The solution empowers people | ||
| + \italic{\WPname{}} is a technical approach for anonymous collaboration | ||
| + on \WPproposals{} to reach a consensus. The approach empowers people | ||
| having diverse opinions to contribute constructively regarding \WPproposal{} | ||
| creation, deliberation, and approval. Contributions are accepted (or | ||
 | ||
| \startsection[title={Motivation}] | ||
| When making important decisions that require consensus, people can | ||
| - gather information from a variety of sources in many ways. Verifying and | ||
| - correcting that information can be burdensome to impossible, depending | ||
| - on the source. Accurate information is essential to fair democratic | ||
| - practice.\cite[carpini@americans] | ||
| + gather information from a variety of sources. Verifying and correcting | ||
| + that information can be anywhere from burdensome to impossible. | ||
| %These include meeting minutes, web sites, news media, scanned pages, | ||
| %filed reports, Microsoft\WPregistered{} Word documents, Adobe | ||
| %\WPregistered{} PDF files, and content management systems (such as | ||
| %Microsoft SharePoint). | ||
| - \WPname{} is an open, central warehouse for \WPproposals{}. | ||
| - \stopsection | ||
| - | ||
| - \startsection[title={Objective}] | ||
| - TODO | ||
| - \stopsection | ||
| - | ||
| - \startsection[title={Moderation}] | ||
| - TODO: Explain moderated deliberation and other new terms | ||
| + \WPname{} acts as an open, accurate, and central warehouse for | ||
| + publicizing \WPproposals{}. Such reliable information is essential for | ||
| + any fair democratic process.\cite[carpini@americans] | ||
| \stopsection | ||
| - \startsection[title={Solution}] | ||
| - TODO | ||
| + \startsection[title={Purpose}] | ||
| + \WPname{} may be of interest to anyone who wants to: | ||
| + | ||
| + \startitemize | ||
| + \startitem | ||
| + enhance transparency surrounding \WPproposals{}; | ||
| + \stopitem | ||
| + \startitem | ||
| + educate the community on why a \WPproposal{} exists; | ||
| + \stopitem | ||
| + \startitem | ||
| + explain the benefits that ratifying a \WPproposal{} will achieve; | ||
| + \stopitem | ||
| + \startitem | ||
| + communicate financial constraints within a budgetary context; | ||
| + \stopitem | ||
| + \startitem | ||
| + gather feedback on a \WPproposal{} promptly; | ||
| + \stopitem | ||
| + \startitem | ||
| + eliminate redundant feedback on a \WPproposal{}; and | ||
| + \stopitem | ||
| + \startitem | ||
| + prioritize a \WPproposal{} relative to other \WPproposals{}. | ||
| + \stopitem | ||
| + \stopitemize | ||
| \stopsection | ||
| - \startsection[title={Audience}] | ||
| - The document has two parts. The first part, which explains how the | ||
| - solution operates, is intended for: elected officials, managers, | ||
| - and business analysts. The second part, which provides technical | ||
| - information, is intended for software developers. | ||
| - \stopsection | ||
| + \startsection[title={Applicability}] | ||
| + TODO | ||
| - \startsection[title={Purpose}] | ||
| + = Target user group | ||
| + + charitable organizations | ||
| + + commerical endeavours | ||
| + + municipalities | ||
| + | ||
| While the primary intent is to enable electronic direct democracy | ||
| for citizen initiatives,\cite[kattamuri@debate] the system can | ||
| ||
| \stopitem | ||
| \stopitemize | ||
| + | ||
| + \stopsection | ||
| + | ||
| + \startsection[title={Audience}] | ||
| + The document has two parts. The first part, which explains how the | ||
| + solution operates, is intended for: elected officials, managers, | ||
| + and business analysts. The second part, which provides technical | ||
| + information, is intended for software developers. | ||
| \stopsection | ||
| \stopchapter | ||
xml/tex/manual.pdf
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xml/tex/sources.bib
| } | ||
| +@article{degreiff@deliberative, | ||
| + title={Deliberative democracy and group representation}, | ||
| + author={De Greiff, Pablo}, | ||
| + journal={Social Theory and Practice}, | ||
| + pages={397--415}, | ||
| + year={2000}, | ||
| + url={http://philpapers.org/rec/DEGDDA}, | ||
| + publisher={JSTOR} | ||
| +} | ||
| + | ||
| + |
xml/tex/title.tex
| } | ||
| \vfill{} | ||
| - A concept for mediated deliberation. | ||
| + A concept for moderated deliberation. | ||
| \stopstandardmakeup | ||
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